19.10.2016

Critique / Understand / Making

Since me and Ruby missed a lot of the classes, we didn't get enough critique and were a bit behind, so Lee offered to meet up with us and discuss where we could go with the project. After showing her our design, I felt better and felt like I had the time to drastically improve the poster and flyer, even though hand-in was the next day. 

What I got out of it was that I needed to:
- Tie in the flyer with my poster, so that its linked, looks the same, etc
- The visuals still clash, make some smaller or bigger, dog shit shouldn't be the main focal point
- Lines could still be changed, look a bit off? Change it around
- Need to add subtext to the poster, what's wrong, how they can help, facts, etc
- Some parts are cut off, and the white burnt out edges perhaps aren't working
- Type could be adjusted
- Names are still fine
- Add the 'Love Your Coast' logo to the poster and flyer
- Flyer doesn't look the same, text is okay, but more could be added
- Add a sustainability section, maybe a treasure hunt? Top 10 things you can find on a beach?
- Logo is a bit off on the front page, move it to the back
- Imagery isn't working, subtext is a bit weird, need to change it
- Headings also don't work, seem a bit too regal and bright?

A lot of things to change in under 24 hours, but I reckon I should be sweet.